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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I like the idea behind this one. I think you selected a good background, and the addition of the skirt works well. There's just something that doesn't work, and I'm having a hard time figuring that out. Perhaps it's her top, it could be darker (even though the sparkles are there), and the shadows in her skirt could be darker. However, I think it's her face. Yes, some of the sparkles would help highlight her face, but I don't think it would that bright. The brightest spark begins at her hand, and her arm is out stretch, so I don't think that much light would be on the face. Try these suggestions and see if they work or not. After all, these are just my thoughts. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>